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A story where Kouji and Zoe tickle torture Takuya. Contains tickling with fingers, feathers, and licking. Also contains a bit of Takumi (Takuya and Zoe)

Takuya's Tickle Torture

"I'm bored...." Takuya muttered, glancing at Zoe.

He, Zoe, and their friend Kouji were sitting in front of tree, completely bored out of their minds. J.P., Tommy, and Kouichi had left for a while to help gather up supplies, such as firewood and food, since Takuya and the other two had done everything the previous day. It would be at least a few hours before their three friends returned with Bokomon and Neemon. And Takuya was not one who liked to wait.

Zoe laid down on the ground, looking over at Takuya. "Sorry, Takuya. I don't know what to tell you."

"But I'm bored!" He exclaimed. "Can you entertain me?"

Kouji rolled his eyes. "Why don't you entertain yourself?"

Takuya groaned. "Because I don't know what to do. I want you guys to entertain me!"

"Sorry, but last time I checked, I wasn't part of a traveling circus," his raven-haired friend muttered.

"Zoe, can you entertain me, then?" Takuya asked the blond girl.

Zoe sighed. "Like what? What do you expect me to do? Juggle rocks or something?"

"Hey, if you could do that, then that would be pretty cool!" The brunette exclaimed, running off in pursuit of some rocks. "I'll be right back!"

As soon as he was gone, Kouji glanced over to Zoe. "Takuya's really been getting on my nerves lately...you?"

"Well....he's just being Takuya," she replied after a moment. "It's not his fault that he has a short attention span."

"Still...." Kouji shifted. "He pissed me off the other day."

Zoe smirked. "Oh, when he stole your bandana? Yeah, you chased him for nearly a half hour before you got it back."

"And he annoyed you the other day, as well," Kouji pointed out. "He kept teasing you and pushed you into a lake...."

"Yeah...well.....He was only playing," the blond said, standing up for her brown-haired friend. "I know he didn't mean to upset me."

Kouji snorted. "I know he didn't mean to, but he still got you mad. You were completely soaked and had to dry your clothes in the sun and avoid us."

"Well, I pulled him in with me," she told him. "So he had to deal with it, too."

"I'm coming back!" Takuya called out from deep inside the woods. "So get ready to juggle some rocks for my entertainment."

Zoe groaned. "I am not looking forward to this....."

"Why don't we get back at him for all those times that he annoyed us?" Kouji suggested.

"What did you have in mind?" The blond asked.

Kouji leaned over and whispered something quietly so that only she could hear. Takuya was emerging from the woods with an armful of rocks, an excited grin in his face.

"That's perfect," Zoe whispered with a smirk. "It won't hurt him, but it'll get him to stop being such a jerk so much."

"Alright, I'm back." Takuya walked over to his two friends. "And I brought a ton of rocks, so you have plenty to juggle with. Just don't hit yourself in the head with any of them."

"Takuya, can I have a hug?" Zoe asked, pouting her lips slightly.

"Uh...." Takuya's face turned red, unsure what to say.

Zoe hugged him around the waist for a few seconds, completely stunning the boy. She suddenly grabbed his wrists and held them in place behind his back. Kouji then came up behind Takuya and bound the brunette's wrists together with a spare bandana.

"Hey, what the hell?!" Takuya demanded as Zoe pulled way from him. "What are you guys doing?!"

"Revenge," Kouji replied evily, pushing his friend to the ground. "It's a good thing that I have so many bandanas....."

Takuya had conveniently landed near two tree roots sticking out of the ground. He could not protect himself as Zoe and Kouji each grabbed one of his ankles and secured both of them to the tree roots, so that his legs were spread out slightly.

"What the hell are you doing?!" Takuya demanded again, thrashing to release himself. "Untie me!"

"No, I don't think we're going to do that," Kouji replied nonchalantly. "But we will later....."

Takuya swallowed nervously. "What are you going to do to me?"

Zoe sat down beside him, resting her head flirtatiously against his shoulder. "Hey, Takuya? We have a question for you."

"W-what is it?" He asked, his heart rate speeding up.

The blond smiled and brought her mouth up to his ear to whisper. "Are you ticklish?"

"What?! NO!" Takuya replied with vehemence. "Now let me go!"

"I don't believe him," Kouji speculated. "Do you, Zoe?"

Zoe shook her head. "No, I wasn't convinced either."

"Guys, this isn't funny!" Takuya growled at them, trying to free himself again. "Just untie me and I won't get mad at you!"

"Oh, was that a threat?" Kouji raised an eyebrow. "So, if we don't untie you, then you'll be mad at us?"

"I'll be more than mad!" The brunette groaned, pulling at each of his bonds. "I'm going to kill you both!"

Kouji and Zoe exchanged smirks before shrugging with indifference. Zoe then moved away from her brown-haired friend and made her way over to his feet. Kouji sat down behind Takuya, causing the brunette to shift nervously.

"What are you guys doing?" Takuya asked.

Zoe did not reply, but simply pulled his shoes off. She cast them aside and gently peeled his socks away as well, revealing his bare feet.

"Zoe, don't do it!" Takuya told her. "Please, don't-"

He was suddenly cut off as Kouji reached forward and began to tickle his friend's sides. Takuya burst into laughter, trying to squirm away from the touch.

"NOHAHAHA! STOP PLEAHAHAHEASE!"

"Well, Zoe. I think he lied to us," Kouji remarked, feigning surprise. "Looks like he is ticklish."

Zoe smiled. "It does look that way."

The blond then began to lightly scribble her fingers against the soft soles of Takuya's feet. The brunette's struggles grew stronger, and he began to wiggle his toes vigorously. Kouji continued his assault to Takuya's sides, moving his fingers up and down to find the most sensative spot.

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Takuya squirmed and twisted, his laughter drowning into his friends' ears. "STOOOOP!!! I C-CAN'T T-TAHAHAHA TAKE IT!"

Kouji suddenly ended his tickling and stood up. "Why don't you have some fun on your own, Zoe? I'll be right back."

As he walked away, Zoe flashed Takuya a playful smile and kept up her torture on Takuya's insanely ticklish feet. She lightly traced her finger up and down his sensative arch, from the end of his heel to the base of his toes.

"ZOEEHEHEHE! STOHOHOP! HAHAHAHAHAHA!" Takuya tried to kick, but the bandanas restrained him, rendering him completely helpless.

The girl dragged her nails across his soles, then wiggled her fingers wildly against his defenseless foot. Takuya curled his toes as she got close too them, trying to protect them.

"Nope, you're not going to do that," Zoe told him as she gently pulled his toes back.

With her other hand, she began to tickle his sensative toes, from the base to the tips of them. Takuya was in hysterics by now, furiously trying to pull free. His efforts were useless, though, and Zoe kept on tickling him.

"HAHAHAHAHA STAHAHAHAP! PLEAHEHEHEASE!" He laughed, tears running down his face.

Zoe's hands were soft and smooth, making the torture that much worse. Her delicate fingers continued to scribble up and down his entire foot, tickling on and in between his toes. Takuya wiggled them helplessly, tears running down his face.

"HAHAHAHAHA! ZOEHEHEHEHEHE! STAHAHAP! HAHAHAHAHAHA!" Takuya twisted and jerked around, his feet completely at the mercy of his friend. "IT TICKLES! HAHAHAHAHAHA!"

"I'm not going to stop," the blond told him, keeping up her work. "I'm having too much fun. And you look absolutely adorable when you laugh."

Normally Takuya would've blushed and said something stupid. However, this time he was too preoccupied trying to squirm and wiggle his toes out of Zoe's grasp. To his horror, Zoe, who had been concentrating only one foot, used one of her hands to assault his other. She was now ruthlessly tickling both of his bare feet, causing the brunette to grow even more hysterical.

"NOHOHO! NOT THE TOHOHOHOES!" Takuya yelled out, feeling her soft fingers tickle the bases of his toes on one of his feet.

On the other foot, she was concentrating on the sensative arch, then the ball of his foot. Takuya was screaming with laughter, just wishing for the nightmare to end. No matter how much he wiggled his feet and toes, Zoe's feather-like touches never ceased.

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Takuya was gasping for air by now, leading the blond to slow down her torture.

She stopped tickling the foot she had originally started with, now lightly wiggling her fingers against the toes of his other. Although the torture had considerably lessened, Takuya continued to howl in laughter. She kept up the torture for about another five minutes before hearing the sound of the raven-haired boy's voice.

"Hey, I'm back." Kouji walked up to his friends, holding a few objects he had found.

Zoe stopped tickling Takuya's feet, glancing up at the long-haired twin. "What did you bring with you?"

Takuya, who had been gasping for air, looked up to see what Kouji was holding. His heart nearly stopped when he saw the four long blue feathers in Kouji's hands.

"No!" He struggled against his restraints, trying to free himself. "No! Not the feathers!"

"Two for you," Kouji said, as he handed them to Zoe. "And two for me."

Takuya yanked at his bonds once again, crying out in dismay. "No! Get away from me!"

Kouji took a seat in front of Takuya's right foot while Zoe was in front of his left. Seconds later, the brunette felt the tips of the feathers lightly stroking at his soles.

"HAHAHAHA! STOHOHOP TICKLING MEHEHEHEHEHEHEE!" Takuya yelled out.

While Kouji had opted for longer strokes going up and down Takuya's sensative foot, Zoe took a different approach. Instead, she made tiny little circles from the heel of his foot, circling all the way up to the base of his toes. Although slower and more delicate, the torture sent the brunette into hysterics, as did Kouji's punishment.

"ZOEHEHEHEHE! KOUJIHIHIHI! STAHAHAHAHAP IT! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Takuya's toes curled and uncurled as the assault continued mercilessly. "IT TICKLES! STAHAHAP! PLEAHEHEHEHEHESE!"

Takuya's eyes were fused shut as tears ran down his face. His laughs grew louder and he almost jumped out of his skin as Zoe began to tickle the arch of his foot with her other feather. She used one for the arch, while the other tickled his toes. She sawed at them just at the bases, driving Takuya crazy. Kouji followed Zoe's example, using one feather for the arch and the other for Takuya's toes.

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I CAN'T TAHAHAHAKE IT!" The brunette yelled with a mixture of laughter.

The torture went on for nearly another ten minutes before the blond decided to change things up again. She began to saw the feather in between Takuya's wiggling toes, not letting up as her friend howled in laughter.

"NOHOHO! ZOEHEHEHEHE!" Takuya tried to kick, cursing the bandanas that kept him helpless. "HAHAHAHAHAHA!"

While Kouji was doing this for mere payback, Zoe was really getting into the tickling. Within the span of several minutes, she had tried a variety of techniques to send her brown-haired friend and crush into hysterics. She tickled on and in between his toes, stroked his arches with both the feathers and her fingers, teased the bases of his toes, dragged the feathers up and down painstakingly slow....there was nothing that the blond didn't try.

Finally, Zoe let up on Takuya's foot tickling. "Hey, Kouji? I'm gonna try somethinge else."

Kouji nodded, continuing to scribble his feathers wildly on Takuya's right foot. Zoe took a set closer to Takuya, right by his legs. She had noticed that with all of his squirming and wiggling, his shorts had ridden up slightly.

"KOUJIHIHIHI! STOHAHAHAP!" Takuya noticed that Zoe was sitting near his legs. "Whahahahat are you going to dohohohahaha?!"

"Something different," the blond told him, moving her hands towards his thighs.

She began to tickle his inner thighs with her soft fingers, causing Takuya to writhe. Kouji stopped what he was doing momentarily to watch the new form of torture.

"ZOEHEHE! THAT TICKLES!" Takuya complained. "STOOOP! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

Zoe did not let up as she ruthlessly dug and wiggled her fingers into his sensative thighs, causing the brunette to go into hysterics. Takuya tried to move his legs, but was unable to dodge Zoe's assaulting fingers. Tears ran down his face as her fingers got dangerously near his crotch, right at one of his most sensative spots. However, she stayed outside of his boxer-clad area, scribbling her fingers against Takuya's ticklish inner thighs.

Kouji laughed at his friend's misery, enjoying the fact that Takuya was getting what he deserved. Zoe made Takuya's ordeal even worse by adding the feathers back into play, stroking his sensative areas.

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! STAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! ZOEHEHEHE! I GONNAHAHAHAH KILL YOU FOR THIS HAHAHAHA!" Takuya writhed and squirmed, doing whatever he could as the feathers tickled his inner thighs mercilessly.

Zoe then lowered her face to his legs, blowing a raspberry in one of his thighs. Takuya laughed as hard as he could, the vibration nearly sending him over the edge.

"Good job, Zoe," Kouji commented.

The blond chuckled, now assaulting Takuya's poor thighs with her fingers, the feathers, and her tongue. Takuya screamed in hysterics, trying to buck Zoe's head away. However, the gesture only encouraged Zoe, who was now tracing circles in his inner thigh with her tongue. After what seemed like an eternity, Zoe ceased her torture. She sat back and allowed the brunette to catch his breath, all the while he was still giggling from the intensity.

"Okay...you guys had your fun, hahaha." Takuya could still feel the wispy feathers and Zoe's fingers and tongue tickling his thighs. "Now untie me."

"We're not done just yet," Zoe told him, taking a seat by his feet again. "At least, I'm not. Are you, Kouji?"

Kouji shook his head. "Nope. Maybe in about thirty minutes I will be."

"Th-thirty minutes?! No! Untie me now!" Takuya commanded them.

His friends exchanged amused looks, then nodded to each other in some type of unspoken agreement. Before Takuya could argue, he immediately felt the quills of Kouji's feathers against his right foot.

"KOUJIHIHIHI! KNOCK IT OFF HAHAHAHA! I SWEAR I'M GONNAHAHAHAH HURT YOU! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Takuya shouted in between laughs, curling and and uncurling his toes as the feathers assaulted him. "STAHAHAHAHAHAP!"

Zoe was busying herself by sawing one of her feathers in between Takuya's wiggling toes, while using the other to scribble against his arch. After a few minutes, though, she got yet another idea. She discarded the feathers, much to Takuya's relief.

"Th-thank you, Zoehehehe!" Takuya told her, still laughing from Kouji tickling his other foot.

However, his relief quickly turned into panic as Zoe laid down in front of his left foot, her face near it. She slid the bandana up the root a few inches, raising Takuya's foot off the ground even further, but still securely tied. She then began to lick at his bare sole, causing Takuya's laughter to double in volume.

"ZOEHEHEHEHE! NOHOHOHOHOHO! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Takuya's toes wiggled wildly as Zoe's tongue reached them, lapping at the tender spots between them. "HAHAHAHAHA! STAHAHAHAP! IT TICKLES HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

"It's supposed to," Zoe said, nibbling at his ticklish toes.

Takuya giggled and writhed, trying to escape the torture. His laughs seemed to echo around them, causing his two friends to be greatly amused. Kouji used both his fingers and feathers to tickle Takuya's right foot, not sure if he wanted to use Zoe's tactic. The blond ran her tongue up and down Takuya's arch, going back and forth for nearly five minutes.

"NOHOHO! KOUJIHIHIHIHI! ZOEHEHEHEHEHEHE! STOOOP IT! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Takuya yelled out with a mixture of laughs.

The torture on Zoe's side was worse than Kouji's, sending him into almost a meltdown. The tip of Zoe's tongue continued to slide up and down his sensative soles, before she focused on his toes once again. She nibbled and sucked on each toe one at a time, while her fingers scribbled around on his arch. With the toe sucking and tickling, as well as both feet being assaulted with fingers, Takuya was sweating bullets. If it was possible, his laughing grew even louder as Zoe's tongue darted in and out between each of his toes, licking them into oblivian.

"Eh, screw it," Kouji muttered as he raised Takuya's other leg slightly. "It won't kill me to do this...."

Kouji began to lick Takuya's helpless right foot, using the feathers to brush up against the sole. He grunted as Takuya's wiggling toes moved feverishly around in his mouth, but he used the opportunity to lick and suck on every last inch of them.

"NOHOHO! GUYS! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I CAN'T TAHAHAHAHAHAKE IT ANYOMORE! HAHAHAHAHA! STAHAHAHAHAHAP!" Takuya begged, not a single part of his ticklish feet and toes being spared.

That particular punishment lasted almost fifteen minutes, with Takuya bucking wildly to escape the torture. Yet no matter what he did, nothing seemed to help.

"GUYS! STAHAHAP! NOW! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" He shouted.

Finally, he curled his toes as best as he could, keeping them clenched as his feet were mercilessly tickled. He gritted his teeth and tried to hold back the laughter, attempting to cease his friends' tongues. It momentarily stopped Kouji's assaulting tongue, making the raven-haired boy try to think of a different tactic. However, Zoe managed to slip her tongue between the little crevices, causing Takuya to giggle.

"Zoe, stop it. Haha," he told her. "Please, stop! It tickles! Hahaha!"

The blond continued to suckle on his toes, even going so far as to insert one finger in her mouth alongside Takuya's toes. She used it to ruthlessly tease the ticklish toes, making them uncurl as he laughed harder.

"ZOEHEHE! PLEAHEHEHSE! STAHAHAP TICKLING MEHEHEHE!" He wiggled his toes and jerked his foot, knowing that no matter what, everything was useless.

"Does it tickle, Takuya?" Zoe asked after a few more minutes.

Takuya nodded vehemently, laughing too hard to give a vocal answer. Kouji had since started tickling the brunette's other foot and toes with his fingers, tongue, and feathers.

"I'm going to do one more thing, and then I'll be done," Zoe told him as she rose.

While his right foot continued to be tickle tortured by Kouji, the blond found a discarded piece of rope from the night before. It was left over from yesterday, as they had pitched a tent. Though not extremely thick, the rope would be sufficient for what she needed to do. She returned to her hysterical friend, tying his toes up so that he could not wiggle or curl them.

"Damn, that was a good idea," Kouji commented. "You're really getting into this, aren't you?"

Zoe shrugged, picking up one of her feathers. "I can't help it. Takuya is just too cute."

Takuya giggled as the feather intruded his toes, putting him in misery as he could no longer do anything to protect them.

"NOOOO! ZOEHEHE! NOT THE TOHOHOHOES!" Takuya writhed and squirmed, hoping that something would help him out.

He was at the mercy of his friends for the next ten minutes, laughing as hard as he could. Finally, Kouji looked at Zoe.

"I think he's had enough, you?" He asked.

"I think so, too." The blond removed the string from Takuya's toes, though she gave them a light tickle first.

Takuya giggled, catching his breath as he felt himself being released. "Finally...hahaha."

He still felt the feathers, fingers, and tongues assaulting him, and he tried his best to block out the teasing sensations. Kouji removed the bandana from Takuya's right ankle, before making his way behind the brunette to untie his wrists. Zoe decided to give Takuya another teasing lick after she had released his other ankle, wanting to make sure that he got the message. She held it up to her face, then let her tongue lick the bases of his toes.

"Are you gonna stop being such a pain to us so much?" She asked him, letting her tongue run in between his toes.

Takuya giggled, too tired to yank his foot away. "Whahahat are you talking about? Hahahaha."

"Dude, we don't mind hanging out with you," Kouji told him. "We're friends and everything, but you gotta lay off being a jerk. You stole my stuff the other day and pushed Zoe into a lake. Don't get us wrong, we really like hanging out with you, especially Zoe, as you can see. But still, cool down on the annoying stuff that you do."

Zoe gave Takuya's foot one final, ticklish lick from the heel to the tip of his toes. "Do you understand?"

Takuya nodded, giggling from the lick. "Yeah. I'm sorry. I'll try to work on it."

"Good." Zoe released his foot.

"I think I hear the guys coming back," Kouji said a moment later, getting up to stand. "I'm gonna go meet up with them and see if they need any help carrying anything."

"Okay," Zoe replied.

Takuya suddenly spoke up. "Hey, can we just keep this between the three of us? I don't want the others to know what happened. It's embarrassing."

"Sure," Kouji replied, leaving him alone with Zoe.

Once he was gone, Zoe threw a sympathetic smile at the brunette. "Hey, I'm sorry we went so rough on you. But you understand that we wanted to make sure that you got the point, right?"

Takuya sighed and nodded. "Yeah, I'll admit, I can be a bit of pain sometimes. But I'm only messing with you and if there's anything I do that really pisses you off, let me know."

"Alright, I will." Zoe handed him his shoes and socks. "So, what do you think was the worst part?"

"All of it," Takuya mumbled. "But especially when you were licking in between my toes....ugh, that was weird."

Zoe smirked. "Oh, don't lie. I know that you liked it."

"Did not," he replied, playfully kicking at her.

The blond gave his bare foot a tickle, causing Takuya to laugh and jerk it away. He then tackled her to the ground, pinning her arms above her head.

"There, now you can't tickle me," he said, his face mere inches away from hers.

"Too bad," Zoe replied with a smile. "You're really cute when you laugh."

Both of them blushed slightly, Takuya still holding her down. He couldn't help but lean down and plant a single kiss on her lips.

"I'm still going to kill you for this later," he told her.

Zoe shifted beneath him and smirked. "Yeah, I look forward to my demise. But we better get up before the guys come back."

However, instead of moving, Takuya began to giggle. He clenched his toes, feeling something tickle his foot.

"Zoehehe, stop tickling mehehe," he laughed.

The blond raised an eyebrow. "I'm not tickling you. How can I seeing how my arms are above my head?"

Takuya continued to wiggle his toes, glancing down at his feet. "Hahaha, then what is it?"

To his horror, a random bird-like digimon had wandered over to him and had begun to run its wings over his feet, ticking them. It then stuck its tongue out and began to run it across his toes.

"HEY! KNOCK IT OFF! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

The End
Wrote this for a good friend of mine, seeing how she is into this type of stuff. It was interesting to write, I must say and might do more in the future. This is my first, so therefore probably not very good. I am expecting plenty of negative comments, though am not bothered by the aspect.
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HiddenFruit Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
lol, you don't have to worry, this is actually better than a lot of the other poor bits of writing out there. I was impressed, especially considering it's your first story with this kind of thing. I didn't like how it centered just on the feet though. Just because I don't really like focused pieces. (Well rounded, as I like to think of it.) But nice one.
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CrazedNHyper Featured By Owner May 10, 2010   Writer
Yeah, I did kind of focus too much on that. But in future works I'm gonna change things up a bit and try not to focus on just one thing in particular. Thanks for the review ^_^
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Mystic-BeingXD Featured By Owner May 7, 2010
Very cute story, love it!! :love:
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CrazedNHyper Featured By Owner May 8, 2010   Writer
Thank you ^_^ Glad you loved it!
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ohstalon06 Featured By Owner May 6, 2010
Hehehe not a bad little story.
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CrazedNHyper Featured By Owner May 6, 2010   Writer
Thank you ^_^
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ohstalon06 Featured By Owner May 6, 2010
If you wanna chat about some ideas for other stories, hit me up on MSN, SN's the same as my DA name
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CrazedNHyper Featured By Owner May 6, 2010   Writer
I don't have MSN, only Yahoo Messenger. But I might be able to get an account soon. I'm interested in any ideas ^_^
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ohstalon06 Featured By Owner May 6, 2010
I can still use my MSN to access your Yahoo account. do you wanna be added?
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CrazedNHyper Featured By Owner May 6, 2010   Writer
Sure. E-Mail address is krissys86@yahoo.com (note that i was extremly lazy whilst making my account so dont have a very interesting screen name) What is your E-Mail?
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